Chad, I really loved the simple yet effective imagery that you used in this poem. The lack of punctuation is also really interesting. It makes each individual line read much more like though then narration. Really honest and believable. Fantastic work!
good poem chat! i really like the imagery used in this poem. i also really like the onomatopoeia you used on the last line. it makes you feel like you are actually there. good work!
Chad,
ReplyDeleteI really loved the simple yet effective imagery that you used in this poem. The lack of punctuation is also really interesting. It makes each individual line read much more like though then narration. Really honest and believable. Fantastic work!
good poem chat! i really like the imagery used in this poem. i also really like the onomatopoeia you used on the last line. it makes you feel like you are actually there. good work!
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